Hey! Amazing art! I really liked it. The theme & story is curious to say the least. Since it has a bit of poetry it might appeal to a more niched audience but it was well crafted in my opinion. Regarding the music, speaking as a working VGM composer, the tone of the instruments were a good choice but some of them lacked a bit of musical cohesion and they weren't looping alright, but I TOTALLY understand that it's very hard to do it all yourself. Some of the choices didn't lead to different outcomes, but I also understand that since it was your first experiment, it was good enough! Good job overall! By the way I suggest you create a twitter to share your work!
Thank you for the feedback!! Yes, I'm 100% new to music so thank you for the advice! I'm glad you enjoyed it! The choices were a bit of a bold decision on my part- I really wanted to drive home a sense of hopelessness by having them all lead to the same outcome! It may not be everyone's cup of tea though, I understand, but I'm excited to continue experimenting with the ways interactivity in games can be used with themes!!
Ohhh got it, well it's worth it experimenting! By the way if you need free music, I publish weekly on my channel @fictiumsounddesign, in case you want to compliment more specific audio for your projects!
I love the writing in this game- it hits hard exactly when it needs to and the comedic parts really make for a good contrast with the later half of the visual novel. The art is also super pretty. The only suggestion I'd make is to maybe improve the music or use copyright-free tracks (I think a lot of people use DOVA-SYNDROME?) instead. It's a good attempt, but I think it lacks some structure. Here's some fanart I made (I can also send the PSD if you want it for any reason). Anyway, good luck on whatever you work on next!
I literally just had someone complain in my comments that they got a false copyright strike or something for a song that is completely free, with the title included in the intro of the game because it wasn't in the video's description. (also lovely art holy shit sometimes I feel like I can draw and then I get humbled so hard)
Whoa, that's amazing!! I'm so flattered to have inspired such a wonderful piece of art! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the nudge towards DOVA-SYNDROME, you're 100% right on the music lol. Feel free to send the PSD!
That was so good! I don't usually like visual novels but by the end I was totally invested, Jesus Christ you draw so well, I'm so jealous of how well you shade and colour, all of the designs are so unique too I love it!!!! I really hope you get more attention because you absolutely deserve it!
Ah, I’m really glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you for the very kind words, this honestly made my day haha :’)! I look forward to making similar projects in the future! 🫡❤️
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Hey! Amazing art! I really liked it. The theme & story is curious to say the least. Since it has a bit of poetry it might appeal to a more niched audience but it was well crafted in my opinion. Regarding the music, speaking as a working VGM composer, the tone of the instruments were a good choice but some of them lacked a bit of musical cohesion and they weren't looping alright, but I TOTALLY understand that it's very hard to do it all yourself. Some of the choices didn't lead to different outcomes, but I also understand that since it was your first experiment, it was good enough! Good job overall! By the way I suggest you create a twitter to share your work!
Thank you for the feedback!! Yes, I'm 100% new to music so thank you for the advice! I'm glad you enjoyed it! The choices were a bit of a bold decision on my part- I really wanted to drive home a sense of hopelessness by having them all lead to the same outcome! It may not be everyone's cup of tea though, I understand, but I'm excited to continue experimenting with the ways interactivity in games can be used with themes!!
Ohhh got it, well it's worth it experimenting! By the way if you need free music, I publish weekly on my channel @fictiumsounddesign, in case you want to compliment more specific audio for your projects!
I love the writing in this game- it hits hard exactly when it needs to and the comedic parts really make for a good contrast with the later half of the visual novel. The art is also super pretty. The only suggestion I'd make is to maybe improve the music or use copyright-free tracks (I think a lot of people use DOVA-SYNDROME?) instead. It's a good attempt, but I think it lacks some structure. Here's some fanart I made (I can also send the PSD if you want it for any reason).
Anyway, good luck on whatever you work on next!
I literally just had someone complain in my comments that they got a false copyright strike or something for a song that is completely free, with the title included in the intro of the game because it wasn't in the video's description. (also lovely art holy shit sometimes I feel like I can draw and then I get humbled so hard)
Whoa, that's amazing!! I'm so flattered to have inspired such a wonderful piece of art! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the nudge towards DOVA-SYNDROME, you're 100% right on the music lol. Feel free to send the PSD!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1F6KJCx5iANXLFwXsJ-K1FelxyI3GLKJW/view?usp=shari...
That was so good! I don't usually like visual novels but by the end I was totally invested, Jesus Christ you draw so well, I'm so jealous of how well you shade and colour, all of the designs are so unique too I love it!!!! I really hope you get more attention because you absolutely deserve it!
Ah, I’m really glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you for the very kind words, this honestly made my day haha :’)! I look forward to making similar projects in the future! 🫡❤️